it's time for the philosophy paper's first draft!

You already constructed four paragraphs. ALL YOU NEED TO DO NOW IS TO ADD 3 MORE + A CONCLUSION.  
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Here is a paper sample. These two thesis and counter paragraphs are the most important. Please, follow this sample. See how her draft has a short clear thesis divided into three points,  yours is only two points: first point, explanation, second point, explanation, 

Next, comes the counter paragraph. Do the same thing. The paragraph starts with "prohibitionists disagree," so the reader clearly understand "who is talking." Same strategy. 1st point, explanation. second point, explanation and so on... 

see the body of both paragraphs above, she discusses and includes sources (with in-text citations).

Don't forget to include your bibliography (we're following MLA protocol).

Here you have 3 different conclusion samples, taken from recent philosophy papers.