i'm almost done. what transpires is ok. you have chosen a topic and your position in it. what i need now is the following.
1- having a position is just the beginning. remember that your espousing a position is as good as your ability to defended it against a counter-position. philosophy is parrying.
2- when looking for sources find sources "for" and "against" your view.
3- i've had some students turning a hand-written page to me. threw them away. not acceptable.
so now, move on. let's write an introduction and more on to the body of the paper.